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我早期做的一首诗歌:長亭送別
送交者: brav 2013月05月26日17:05:14 于 [世界军事论坛] 发送悄悄话
回  答: A Food for Soul - 長亭送別 conscience of cn 于 2013-05-26 09:36:25
Farewell
by brav

Seeing your leaving, your breath is gently felt,
I'll miss you so much, and my heart is to be melt;
Saying goodbye is hard, to you my life and pal,
All the tears in my eyes, Adios sweetie farewell.

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  I wrote this for a lady last - brav 05/27/13 (529)
  淫秽东西,毫无音步格律。get out.  /无内容 - 1882 05/27/13 (470)
  改一下 - 死丢脾气儿 05/26/13 (602)
    Pal is for rhyming - brav 05/27/13 (514)
    Pretty, but reads no passion - brav 05/27/13 (508)
      开个玩笑,想幽默一下。儿歌已。  /无内容 - 死丢脾气儿 05/27/13 (584)
  都感觉到了对方的呼吸,若不是同性恋,最好别用pal  /无内容 - 死丢脾气儿 05/26/13 (506)
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